Dear Emily: I have a piece of good information to tell school Poets Cociety will hold a metting of poetry appreciation at the school hall.I'd like to invite you to come to this meeting .I know you like potery very much.I think this is a good chance for you,Poetry appreciation meeting is valuable. It can give us some knowledges. I believe a lot of students will take part in the meeting this saturday can learn from each other in this d you like to come to meeting？I do hope you are able to come.I think you will be very happy when we see each other. yours, Li hua
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Dear Emily,
I have a piece of good news to tell you. Our school Poets' Club will hold a poem appreciation meeting at the school hall. I'd like to invite you to come with me. I know you like poemsvery much. I think this is a good chance for you. Poem appreciation meeting is valuable from which we can learn more knowledge. I believe a lot of students will take part in the meeting this Saturday afternoon. We can learn from each other. Would you like to come? I do hope you can come. I think you will be very happy when we meet each other. Yours, Li hua
修改老师：Crystal 老师
高二:蔡梓微
