Dear friend, Today I will introduce a cute girl to has a fair-sounding name——Spring. g is very beautiful that like an 's unbelievable that her dresses are so colorful that I can't even believe my e are many flowers on her dresses,and we can also see grass,trees,butterflies and so yone who knew her all loves her is like a princess in the storybook. ng is also a kind loves everyone and shows all of her beauty to is popular because of her wants to keep a good relationship with other seems to understand a magic that is able to make us forget the sadness in can feel better when we stay with her. All in all,she is the best girl who I have ver,she will leave us in June.I'm going to miss her all year round after she leaves. Do you start to love Spring after reading this letter?Then,hug in Spring and cherish Spring——the greatest time in a year! Yours, Wendy
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Dear friend,
Today I want to introduce a friend to you. She has a wonderful name-Spring. She is very beautiful, like an angle. She has got a colorful dress. There are many flowers on her dress, and we can also see green grass, trees, butterflies on it. Everyone loves her dress. She looks like a princess. She is also a kind girl. She loves everyone and shows all her beauty to us. She is friendly. She wants to have a good relationship with everyone. She seems to have a magic that can make everyone forget the sadness in life. We feel happy when we stay with her. All in all, she is the best person I have known. However, she leaves us in June every year. I'm going to miss her all year round. Do you start to love her after reading this letter? Then, enjoy yourself with her and cherish her—the greatest time in a year!
Yours,
Wendy
修改老师：Crystal老师
初二:魏瑀宏
